If you discover that your beloved doll was alive, you will… 如果你發現心愛的娃娃是活著時,你會……
◎The reason that makes the plot good was not just because of the chilling plot, it also has a very thoughtful ending, which is very moving. 故事吸引人的不只是在於恐怖、驚悚的情節,發人深省的結局更撼動人心。
◎It make the human evil more specific, creating a powerful demon-Datan. When evil grew from one’s heart, the person will be manipulated, if cannot reflect him/herself, the person will step into a doomed state for all eternity. 將人心中的惡念具體化,塑造出一個強大的惡魔──代丹。當惡念從心中滋長,人便會受其控制;若不能自省,將步入萬劫不復的境地。
◎The book tells us good and evil were just a few steps apart. It also explains the root of chaotic society, that people lose humanity from their good soul one part at a time. 強調善、惡在一念之間並剖析社會亂象的根源──乃是人們一點一滴流失了人性(善的靈魂)。
This is the third novel written by the teenage writer, he has a wide variety of writing material, but has a completely different style. And for sharing it with more readers, he even translated it into Chinese, for his elementary school teacher, who has taught him Chinese.
A thirteen year old boy with a mature thought that suppressed his age. Through observing, he knows the chaos and mess within society, all because of humans. When they think things initially with bad intentions, they cannot stay alert, or cannot control or reflect themselves, causing chaos. The author wants to mix this thought with the suspenseful plot, to make people know the truth of the world, and took every step cautiously.
The boy (author) uses his delicate thoughts and simple ways of viewing the world, with a storytelling technique, to create Kelly, a normal innocent girl, and just because she was king on dolls, she was manipulated by evil, making her stepping closer and closer to the demon, which took away her normal, happy life.
作者簡介:
陳立恩(Andy Chen)
一個台灣土生土長的男孩,現就讀彰化縣立成功高級中學國中部一年級。
五歲便自發性的提筆創作,五年間完成《Lan and Leo》、《CJ7》、《Chaplin script version》等十餘本自創英文故事書,以及《The Universe series》、《Animal Worlds》、《Apocalypse 2012》等十餘本英文小百科,均為手寫本,圖文並茂、饒富童趣。
2015年1月出版《Mankind vs Extraterrestrial》,是一部恣意馳騁童稚想像力的英文科幻小說。同年6月出版《Stan Duke》,乃以幽默詼諧的筆調,描寫一位青年饒舌歌手為理想奮鬥的故事。
Andy Chen, a Taiwanese boy, is a junior high school student.
He started to write when he was five, it took him five years to complete 《Lan and Leo》、《CJ7》、《Chaplin script version》and many other tens of storybooks, and 《The Universe series》、《Animal Worlds》、《Apocalypse 2012》and other tens of little encyclopedias, all of them are handwritten, both with excellent illustrations and writing, filled with childhood joy.
He published his first book《Mankind vs Extraterrestrial》in 2015/1, a sci-fi novel written through childhood imagination recklessly.
He published 《Stan Duke》in 2015/6, a humorously written book about a teenage rapper chasing his dreams.
Recklessly pushing through limits, he tried many writing styles, and has completed 《The Doll》 in 2015/8. As Andy grew older, he began to mix his own point of view, and his thoughts of life into 《The Doll》. 《The Doll》was a horror novella, but what’s praiseworthy to the book was that the author mixes philosophy into the thrilling, suspenseful plot. (Kinda)
When writing in English, he tried to adapt his Chinese. Besides translating his 《The Doll》into the Chinese version 《怖娃娃》, he decided to write a Chinese novel called 《馬拉松》, hopefully through his writing, he could improve his own Chinese.
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As the dolls were shipped into a small toy shop, the owner was checking if they were suitable for selling.
She was checking a green dwarf. As she checked…
“AAAAAHHHHH!”
The dwarf’s teeth turned razor-sharp. Its eyes turned into dark sockets. A venomous voice hissed from it. Blood and mucus appeared suddenly.
“Let me kill.”
A stream of blood splattered into the wall followed by a chilling hiss.
“Look, mom! There’s a toy store!” A six-year old girl, name’s Kelly James the sixth headed out with his father and mother on the streets. Kelly always has a great passion for toys, and if she saw one, no DOUBT she would head toward it. She is chubby and had a round and fat-face, her hair was tied in a small bun. She was wearing a short, purple skirt and a white T-shirt.
“Okay, sweetheart.” Her mother, Cindy said. She had a job-of being a computer programmer, but her business was highly unsuccessful. She was slender and fair-skinned, with her sheet of golden hair bobbing around her head. “So what do you want to get?”
“I dunno.” Kelly said.
His father, Jack, rubbed his head in suspicion. He was working as a Chinese language teacher in FIREFOX high school, and his Chinese was very proper. He was very tall and handsome with short black hair and noticeable muscles. “I’m not interrupting Kelly, but she really is growing up.”
“Oh really?” Cindy asked, raising an eyebrow.
“You know what? She’s turning seven. She’s going to be in primary school anytime soon. ”
“Of course, but there’s nothing wrong with the toy store.” Cindy said.
“Nothing wrong?” Jack asked. “I’m not a fan on toys, and Kelly cannot speak even the simplest Chinese.”
“爸爸真小氣.” Kelly muttered. (Daddy is so cheap.)
Jack sighed.
Then, they headed into the toy store. It was huger than any other toy store in the history, but it was clothed with spider webs, and the outer look of it looks like an old house.
Still, they ignored that.
What toy store is that? Jack asked himself. It looked neither tidy nor attractive. He must have seen wrong. He daughter is really king on those stupid toys.
But it wasn’t as they expected.
It looked incredibly like a crime scene. The floor has many broken plates that scattered across the floor. There was no seller in the paying desk. And the worst was that there are no lights, not even a single plug in the store, making the store seemly like a graveyard. A patch of blood was splattered onto the wall.
“What the hell?” Jack asked himself.
He stared at the shelves. It was stuffed with many dolls, but a lot of them looked like they were severely injured or destroyed.
“There must be a good doll in there for Kelly to play.” Cindy said. “Or else, this must be a stigmatized property.”
“What’s a stigmatized property?” Kelly asked.
“It means a place with bad things.” Cindy said.
“Oh.” Kelly muttered. The store looks pretty like a haunted house. A lot of dolls have spider webs with them. Kelly let out a frightened face.
With Kelly, Cindy followed her to search for a proper doll. First they started with a stuffed rabbit toy on the top shelf, and Kelly can’t reach it. Its head was decapitated and its body was stuffed with thousands of ants.
“I don’t like ants.” Kelly said.
“Next.” Cindy said.
Cindy saw a plastic alligator on the lower shelf. It looked fine. But when Kelly touched it, its body cracked and exploded into pieces of shattered plastic.
“That must have been too fragile.” Cindy said.
Cindy headed toward a small teddy bear on the middle part of the shelf. Its eyes were crawling out maggots, oozing mucus all over.
“AAAAHHHHH! WHAT THE HELL IS IT?” Cindy shrieked.
Jack is waiting outside the store. He felt disappointed over Kelly’s love of toys.
He must have banned her. He then snorted and headed into the store.
“This must be one.” Cindy said. She has found an only normal, clean doll on the top shelf. It looks like a Green Dwarf, with its mischievous look in its yellow eyes. Its entire face was green, and it was wearing a leather jacket and a short blue pants its auburn hair was long and was tied into a ponytail. It is not covered either in spider webs, nor maggots or ants.
“Perfect!” Kelly said, excited.
Cindy looked at the dwarf. Not even a single tag was on it.
“What the-?” She asked.
Jack immediately stormed into the store. He was staring at the toy ferociously.
“I have enough.” He said through gritting teeth.
“I want THAT TOY!” Kelly said. She protectively grabbed the toy and hugged it.
Kane’s hands slowly inched toward the toy.
“It’s her birthday, dear;” Cindy said breathlessly; “Just let her have it!”
“She’s getting old;” Jack said impatiently; “Now-put-it-back; you idiot!”
“I want it!” Kelly yelled.
“Put it back-”
“NO!”
“YOU WERE GETTING DEAD IMMATURE, CHILD, YOU-”
“I-WANT-IT!”
Kelly did one thing that she had never done before-she slapped her father right in the face.
Cindy gasped.
Jack rubbed and groaned, his face pumping red.
“Daughter;” He growled; “YOU KNOW WHAT THE GODDAMN THING YOU HAD DONE?”
“WHAT?” Kelly yelled defiantly.
Jack grabbed the doll from Kelly. He then angrily threw it into the floor.
BLAM! The doll fell into the broken pieces of floor bits, exploding out a small cloud of dust. Jack snorted.
He then walked out of the store.
Kelly’s veins were bulging with rage. Cindy tried to calm her down.
“Sorry, dear;” She said. “He’s just upset. You can get another doll.”
Kelly slowly turned her head toward the dwarf. It was the perfect toy I ever seen; she thought; why shouldn’t I get it?
Kelly still need to leave the store, as Cindy quickly took her out of the store. The sky is getting darker now. They quickly left.
Kelly muttered: “I wish you can goddamn die.” She never said things like that before.
She didn’t know she done a thing like that; she seemed to love that special feeling, but afraid of it, too.
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Ⅱ
Jack was disappointed as he drove the car, with Kelly and Cindy sitting on the back seat. Kelly was mad at her dad about the accident of slapping him.
Jack was fussing hard about what Kelly had done with him.
“Daughter;” He finally spoke after a half-hour of fussing; “You must’ve listen to me well. Stop being such a child, you just gotta grow up.”
“But I love that toy.” Kelly muttered.
“You didn’t know what love was by that age, dear. Also, you were getting into primary school by tomorrow, dear. I had helped you attend FIREFOX primary school. You’ll love it.” Jack said.
“I know.” Kelly piped. “Love was um-just love, okay?”
“Kelly;” Cindy said. “You should calm down a little.”
She nodded. But she stared at her hand. Something weird- her hand was turning abnormally pale.
Cindy noticed.
“What the-?” She gasped.
“Why my hand’s turning white?” Kelly asked.
Jack looked back at them.
“What the hell is that, daughter?” He asked in an annoyed tone.
“My-my hand’s turning pale.” Kelly said. She has a dread feeling. Her head is slowly twisting by her neck.
“And my neck hurts.” She said.
“Do you need to go to the damn hospital with her again, Cindy?” Jack asked impatiently.
“Maybe.” Cindy said.
“And I’m getting dizzy.” Kelly said in an airy and abnormally stressful voice. “And I’m-”Her throat seemed to be growing a huge lump.
“SUCK BLOOD.”
“What?” Cindy said. She had just heard a second voice coming from Kelly’s lips. It sounded like cold venom and possibly thirst and lust, with a combination of snake hissing, wolf snarling, and scratchy moaning with layers of people raspy breathing, unlike Kelly’s normal breaths.
“Did you hear anything, dear?”
“Nothing.” Kelly muttered. “What?” The lump in her throat grew larger, becoming noticeable.
“I’M THIRSTY…I SMELL BLOO –”
“I heard it!” Kelly yelled. “Is it you, dad?” She asked his father in a threatening way.
“I did not like this attitude, daughter.” Jack called. “And by the way, this voice-I did not speak it.”
“Not me either.” Kelly said.
“I WANT TO SUCK YOUR BLOOD…I’M HUNGRY…”
“Are you goddamn pulling pranks, daughter?” Cindy asked.
“No, I’m not!” Kelly yelled.
“You sure are.” Jack said.
“NO, I’M NO-”
Suddenly, the car they were sitting in flipped over.
“AAAAHHHHHH!” They screamed.
A loud horn blared in the car. Red lights flashed all over.
CRRRASSSSHHH! The car slammed heavily into the asphalt, crushing over several pieces of asphalt, bare pieces of metallic shards which slammed into everywhere.
“I’mma kill you, brat!” Jack yelled.
“You won’t!” Kelly yelled. The second voice spoke with her normal voice at the same time.
The car stopped immediately. The lights went off.
What happened next was-
BLAM! Kelly was tossed out of the car.
“You goddamn idiot!” Kelly screamed as she got up.
“You even curse!” Jack yelled. “You should leave us, stay there! I don’t want to argue this thing! You caused this goddamn thing!!” Jack’s car drove away in high speed immediately.
“Fine!” Kelly yelled. “You-”
BOOM! Her mouth suddenly opened, and a bat flew out. The bat is abnormally large, about a two-foot wingspan, with glowing red eyes and blood-covered teeth.
Kelly shivered. The bat stared hard at Kelly and hissed like a crossover between a snake, crocodile and a bat with a thick amount of mucus in its nose. Then it flew away across the streets.
Where is it going? Kelly wondered. She then called out without control of her mind;
“I’m gonna leave, there Kelly. I lived inside that.”
“What?” Kelly said, as if she didn’t notice. She didn’t knew who is talking, and what was whatever who that is talking about.
BOOM! Her mouth suddenly opened, and-
A gigantic monster storm of bats exploded out of her mouth violently.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”
She screamed as the large storm of endless stream of bats escaped from her mouth.
The storm of bats all followed the initial bat’s direction, and charged at an abnormally high speed. Then, the silence then followed as the storms of bats were all gone.
Kelly slowly walked toward the direction of bats. Where-ARE they heading?
“What’s happening?” She asked herself as she followed.
She ignored what had just happened and she continued on following.
In the toy store which Kelly had get into, the doll still remains lying on the floor. The dwarf was lying hard, motionless.
Then, a swarm of bats flew into the store and flew into the doll’s mouth. They crammed hard into it.
Then, the doll’s eyes glowed in a red shade, and the eyes switched into hideous dark sockets. The doll’s face turned white, and a few black marks appear.
Then, a trickle of blood rolled down the doll’s eyes. The doll’s eyes switched back to normal again in a blur.
Kelly headed into the toy store. She then stared into it.
“Hello?” She called silently.
Of course, no one’s there.
She anxiously continued to walk when she stepped on the doll.
She stared it for a period of time. It looked just like it was before. She smiled.
“I’ll get you, little doll.” Kelly said. But she noticed two tiny streams of blood rolling down its cheeks.
“I can help you.” She said. “I’ll wash that blood off your face.”
And she leaved the toy store.
It was midnight when she had arrived at her house, where Jack and Cindy were regretting about abandoning their own daughter. It was in the city where it lies near some grumpy neighbors. Their house is a like a minuscule one when it was compared to the city’s huge houses, with a small amount of colored parts to it. It was the size of a double-decker bus, to be exact, and she headed in.
As she closed the door, the door leaved a bloody scratch on the doorknob. A cold hissing voice oozed from it.